Me-
White web of winged mist/
Silent kiss blows thousand wishes/
Just a dandelion.
He-
"Five seven, then five/
Syllables mark a haiku/
Your usage is Strange"
27.8.2011
White web of winged mist/
Silent kiss blows thousand wishes/
Just a dandelion.
He-
"Five seven, then five/
Syllables mark a haiku/
Your usage is Strange"
27.8.2011
white / winged / mist
ReplyDeletesilent / kiss / wishes
great sounds .. moving in and out
syllables? what have they got to do with writing
a haiku? I say!